I think that this story might not see the light of day for another year it needs a lot of editing :6:

 anyway I got to go tonight, I’m about to crash and burn :zz: and I am going on the route tonight. *huggles iPod* I am so happy for that thing. It is able to keep me up while I’m on the route.

 I am really having fun writing this up. Decromethian kinda creeps me out a little, but he’s fun to write :6: http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q230/SarrasiRasinco/RPG/Boys/Zelda__Dark_Knight_Link_by_animetay.jpg that’s his pic. Evil Link :ninja:

 I like to write Crystal but she’s kinda depressing. And she doesn’t believe in God <_< which is majorly bad. She believes that He abandoned her, but that’s not true! *sighs* I hope that she believes in him before the end of the story, Em knows why :6:.

 What really surprised me is that Decromethian fell in love with her :blink: :blink: especially since she’s a diggamite and he’s a majesti. Which if they fell in love with each other got married and had kids that would equal part majesti… or as he calls them ‘mutts’ (thanks Elya ^.^ you RPing him has really helped me figure out his personality :6: ).

 well that’s all that I have for today. See ya

 Anyway, using quotes from Quote of the Day on CleanPlace is hilarious! I guess that I should stop procrastinating by reading Fruits Basket :6: but I figured out a strategy, I’ll write 500 words then read a chapter it works wonders

 well I gotta go and write more! Happy NaNoing!

 here’s an excerpt from my story

“A long time ago there was a prince and princess. They were named the rulers of the elements. They had the power over lightning. The princess wasn’t able to die except by the hand of her brother, the prince over death. They called forth others to help them rule over the elements. And so was gained the Princes and Princesses of Time. “But things weren’t peaceful. Four of the rulers were of that which is called ‘the light’ and the other five were of ‘the dark’. Even the twin leaders were on different sides. Seven dragons of the Silent Warriors were sent to protect the elements. Eventually the fight got so bad that the first dragon fell to protect the Princess of Ice. And so the Princess of Life ordered her own brother to kill her so that the fighting could stop.” “The Prince of Death knew that he couldn’t destroy his own sister. So instead he worked with those of the dark to seal away the powers until the descendents of the original elements could take up the role and reign in peace.” 

“It worked, until the Prince of Death lost all of his good side to protect his twin. Now almost a thousand years later, those of the elements are rising again. The Princesses of Fire, Ice, Stars, and Life, and the Princes of Water, Air, Death, and Earth are returning slowly, but surely.”

 Nentûr The Prince of the WaterFrom: The Fall of the Prince  Basic Statistics
Name: Nentûr
Age: 360
Gender: Female Birthdate: Krinsone licrom tohmrek metrok (January 11, 1647) (pronounced: Krin-so-nay lie-chrome dom-reck med-rohc)
Hometown: Keridinion (Care-ih-tin-ee-on)
Current Residence: Usually under the sea in his kingdom
Occupation: He’s the prince of water, what does he need to work for? He follows the orders of Decromethian though
Talents/Skills: He likes to use water, storms, telepathy, and empathy for powers. He’s really good with a sword but uses daggers as his choice of weapon. He cannot use a bow, but he can use his daggers underwater (fireice is a wonderful metal) Salary: he’s a prince, he’s very rich.
Birth order: only child
Family Relationships: (spouse, siblings, parents, etc.) He doesn’t know any of his family.

Physical Characteristics
Height: 5’9
Weight: about 150 pounds
Race: Majesti (A race in the middle of Jericho)
Eye Color:  red
Hair Color: light blue
Skin color: pinkish normal pinkish color
Shape of Face: heart
Distinguishing features: he has a mark on his forehead that shows him to be the prince of water. It’s a blue tear drop in the middle of his forehead.
How does she dress? He has a blue army like coat (kinda like Jack Sparrow’s long coat) that has silver accents, underneath that he has a simple white cotton tunic, he has brown boots that go up to his shins, and a grey cloak. He carries a sword at his side and his daggers in his coat sleeves. http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q230/SarrasiRasinco/RPG/Boys/Star__Full_Body__by_Maga_Link.jpg Majesti http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q230/SarrasiRasinco/RPG/fantasy%20creatures/merman.png Merman
Mannerisms: normal to Majesti *pulls up quote* They have very good manners, they call the militants by their titles, and even the royals are called by titles. Jasmine and her son however don’t like being called by a title, it makes people around them uncomfortable when they aren’t called by the title that they have had by birth.  They bow to those of higher rank or rank of another army. To bow majesti style the men step to the right and bow deep from their waist, arms to the sides. They lift up their heads facing to the left. If they are a commander they bring their left hand up in a salute. (even the princes salute) To salute they bring their right hand up with the forefinger and middle finger extended, their hand is backwards as they do this. They bring the hand up to their forehead and extend the ring finger and pinkie to meet with the first two extended fingers and bring the hand away and to the right sharply. *end quote* When he’s mad he will clench his fists and squirt water through his closed hand. He bites his lip when nervous and when he’s sad he’ll glare more often then not.
Habits: (bites nails, twirls hair, smokes, etc.) He likes to smirk a lot, he plays around with his daggers too.
Health: pretty good, he hardly ever gets colds.
Hobbies: sword fighting, spying, swimming, and many other things
Disabilities: he follows orders to the letter
Greatest flaw: *looks around* he’s a bit of a flirt
Best quality: he’s so dreamy

Intellectual/Mental/Personality Attributes & Attitudes
Educational Background: he’s a spoiled prince, I think that he got to eighth grade and dropped out.
Intelligence Level: slightly above average
Life Learning Experiences: That Sûlheru will come and save him if he’s in trouble. That it’s ok to be goofy every once in a while (it makes people think your insane and not arrest you)
Short-term goals in life: to serve Decromethian
Long-term goals in life: to have Renaya fall in love with him.
How does Character see himself/herself? He sees himself as someone who is in the right and everyone else is wrong. No matter what they say or do he will always be the right one… he knows that the only one who can talk to him is Sûlheru.
How does Character believe he/she is perceived by others? He thinks that people see him as an idiot, and guess what? He doesn’t care
How self-confident is the character? Very
Does the character seem ruled by emotion or logic or a combination of both? Logic more often then not
What would most embarrass this character? Renaya kissing him.

Emotional Characteristics
Strengths: his anger (I hate to say it but yes, that helps him a lot)
Weaknesses: his stress factor, it really explodes at some points.
Introvert or Extrovert? Introvert
How does the character deal with anger? Pretty well, he has very good control of his anger, he knows that if he does it right he can use it as a way to make his powers stronger.
With sadness/conflict/change/loss? Sadness: he drinks tea and basically shrugs it off. Conflict: He’s actually very good at convincing you that you’re wrong. Change: He says that he couldn’t care less. What happens, happens. Loss: same as change
What does the character want out of life? To defeat all of those who walk in the light.
What would the character like to change in his/her life? He wouldn’t be an orphan.
What motivates this character? Orders, and the sea that calls him.
What frightens this character? Sûlheru dying, Decromethian angry.
What makes this character happy? Happiness, what’s that?
Is the character judgmental of others? Most of the time
Is the character generous or stingy? Stingy (hey spoiled rich prince)
Is the character generally polite or rude? Most of the time he’s polite, but even he has to be rude to people.

Spiritual Characteristics
Does the character believe in God? no
What are the character’s spiritual beliefs? He thinks that nothing will ever be greater then Decromethian, and anyone who believes that there is something better is wrong.
Is religion or spirituality a part of this character’s life? no
If so, what role does it play?

How the Character is Involved in the Story

Character’s role in the novel (main character? hero? heroine? Romantic interest? etc.): Minor Character that is very close-knit in the story. Prince of Water

Scene where character first appears: The second chapter

Relationships with other characters: (Name each character and describe relationships and changes to relationship over the course of the story.)

How is the character different at the end of the novel from when the novel began?: (This is one of the most important things to nail down. A story that invokes change in a character will be more interesting and appealing to your reader.) don’t know yet I just know the names of the characters right now, Miriam (Princess of Water), Sûlheru (Prince of Air), Crystal (Princess of Ice), Safara and Fira (Twin Princesses of Fire), Kemen (Prince of Earth), Sarrasi (Princess of the Stars), Rosaline (her dragon protector), and Decromethian (Her twin and the Prince of Death)

Additional Notes on this Character: He appears in another story, Prince of Water

 here’s Miriam’s sheet

Miriam Arrowhead KitsueFrom: The Fall of the Prince  Basic Statistics
Name: Miriam Arrowhead Kitsue
Age: She appears to be in her thirty’s but she’s close to 300 something
Gender: Female Birthdate: Krindino ketome tohmrek roketmac (June 15, 1682) (pronounced: Krin-tinio Ked-ohm-eh dom-reck roh-keh-mak)
Hometown: Renaya’s castle in the Majesti Lands, close to the border of the Diggamite Caves.
Current Residence: She likes to walk around in the world, so she doesn’t really have a home.
Occupation: Uh, she used to be a dark one, but she’s known as the princess of light, no matter how many times she’s killed, she won’t die.
Talents/Skills: She likes to use lightning She is very telepathic, telekinetic, and can heal, she’s good with a sword, bow, and daggers. She is pretty good with throwing knives. She can play some music but she doesn’t really show up with her flute all that often. Salary: She gets paid the equivalent to $400 a week
Birth order: second born twin
Family Relationships: (spouse, siblings, parents, etc.) She was kidnapped from her family with her twin when she was a baby. So she doesn’t know what her relationship with her parents is. She and her twin kinda clash a little bit (him being the prince of death). She is best friends with her daughter Mina Kitsue (AKA Kitara Katsue), she also hangs out with her granddaughter Cascata. She was married to Michael Kitsue (Mitch) until Renaya killed him and kidnapped Mina. She is now the fiancée of a drow named Metikito. They plan to marry soon.

Physical Characteristics
Height: 5’7
Weight: she just said that she’s appalled you asked that.
Race: Majesti (A race in the middle of Jericho)
Eye Color:  Blue in good Majesti form and Green in evil majesti form
Hair Color: red in good blond in evil
Skin color: pinkish normal skin color when a good majesti and grayish when she’s evil
Shape of Face: oval
Distinguishing features: besides the fact that her hair is really bright red? When she’s dark she has a scar along her left arm, which disappears when she’s good.
How does she dress? She likes to wear tunics and pants or a long green dress with pants underneath. She also has a hip pack and a few hidden daggers and a sword, sometimes she carries a bow. http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d198/middlearthmaiden/Fantasy/Girls/Nyria.jpg her good, http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q230/SarrasiRasinco/RPG/Girls/drow-1.jpg her evil 
Mannerisms: normal to Majesti *pulls up quote* They have very good manners, they call the militants by their titles, and even the royals are called by titles. Jasmine and her son however don’t like being called by a title, it makes people around them uncomfortable when they aren’t called by the title that they have had by birth.  They bow to those of higher rank or rank of another army. To bow majesti style the woman step to the left and bring their right foot behind them pointed. They sweep their right arm in front of them and when they raise their hand they rise themselves it ends with them standing straight up with their arms to their sides. The commanders of the army end the bow with a left handed salute To salute they bring their right hand up with the forefinger and middle finger extended, their hand is backwards as they do this. They bring the hand up to their forehead and extend the ring finger and pinkie to meet with the first two extended fingers and bring the hand away and to the right sharply. *end quote* She also is very bad when it comes to being nervous since she bites her lip when she is.
Habits: (bites nails, twirls hair, smokes, etc.) She likes to play around with one strand of her hair, she also chews her bottom lip from time to time, and the last thing that she does a lot is she speaks before she thinks
Health: very, very, very good (hey princess of life)
Hobbies: singing, sword fighting, spying, and many other things
Disabilities: she has a weakness for her family, if you capture any of them she will do whatever you say.
Greatest flaw: her speaking whatever is in her head, and the fact that she has a mindset of “do whatever it takes to finish the job, even if it means your life.”
Best quality: her heart for her family

Intellectual/Mental/Personality Attributes & Attitudes
Educational Background: well she graduated high school
Intelligence Level: low level genius
Life Learning Experiences: well she can’t die, no seriously she really can’t. She’s been killed three times in her life and she’s still alive. Oh and she said that she’s learned not to trust dark queen Renaya.
Short-term goals in life: to become a better swordfighter, to work for Jasmine Rasinco
Long-term goals in life: to care for her family, to find better ways to serve the Lord, and to finally defeat her brother.
How does Character see himself/herself? She sees herself as someone that will always have bad luck (she’s lost her family a number of times not to mention the fact that she has been killed 3 times), she thinks that she will never be able to live a normal life.
How does Character believe he/she is perceived by others? She thinks that all people view her like her brother does, a traitor, someone who will never amount to anything, who will always mix with people besides Majesti.
How self-confident is the character? She is very self-confident, as long as she isn’t around her brother.
Does the character seem ruled by emotion or logic or a combination of both? Emotion rules out
What would most embarrass this character? Hmmm that’s a lot to ask of poor Miri *looks to make sure she isn’t in room before she types up things* admitting her love to someone, being caught reading a picture book, someone teasing her about Met or Michael, and lastly someone teasing her about being the “royal babysitter” for James and Kohana Rasinco.

Emotional Characteristics
Strengths: her love for family and friends and her ability to joke about any situation
Weaknesses: her temper she cannot keep it under control, she blocks her emotions whenever she’s on a job (although that has failed twice and she fell in love with the targets), and she is very bad at not stressing out about something.
Introvert or Extrovert? Extrovert
How does the character deal with anger? Not well, she will spit fire at you if you attack her family, she has a very bad temper and I mean BAD
With sadness/conflict/change/loss? Sadness: she deals with it by moving on with her life, saying that everything is going to be fine. Conflict: She will win an argument she’s determined on that front. Change: she hates it with a passion Loss: same way she deals with sadness, moves on in her life, saying that it’s alright, this was supposed to happen.
What does the character want out of life? To live the best life she can for the Lord. She also wants to see a couple of great grandchildren.
What would the character like to change in his/her life? She doesn’t want to be the princess of life.
What motivates this character? Her family,
What frightens this character? Her family in trouble
What makes this character happy? Met (*looks innocent*), knowing that she did her job right, seeing her daughter as the young woman that she grew into, and she likes winning battles as a majesti commander
Is the character judgmental of others? Not really
Is the character generous or stingy? generous
Is the character generally polite or rude? POLITE she’s a majesti, how could you even ask if she’s rude!

Spiritual Characteristics
Does the character believe in God? Yes
What are the character’s spiritual beliefs? That God is the one true God and that he sent his son to die on the cross for our sins, and that she will journey up into heaven when the time comes.
Is religion or spirituality a part of this character’s life? kinda
If so, what role does it play? It’s hard to answer this when Miri is a new Christian.